• Members 1416 posts
    Oct. 4, 2023, 5:12 a.m.

    Welcome to the Wednesday Comments and Critique (No Theme & No Brand) thread!
    We are dedicated to continuing the great tradition of this C&C thread because we are convinced that looking at, and talking about images is vital for better photography.
    Our tried and tested concept (15 years and running!) is a weekly "peer-to-peer" photo comments & critique encounter, in which you GIVE and RECEIVE.
    The idea is simple: you post an image and get critique on it, and in return give other people your opinion of their images, or vice versa.

    Any Theme, Any Camera, Any Style, Any Subject.
    We are still figuring out how to create the convenience of threaded view on this new forum. For now, let us agree that you post an image with a title and short explanation, and that all comments include the image as a quote.  Replies to comments may or may not include quotes.

    THREAD GUIDELINES – THE SHORT & SWEET VERSION
    •       This thread does not care about brands. It’s not about the tool, but the image.
    •       Post one image that you would like to get comments on (exceptions: see below).
    •       Add a clear title to your post to reflect the image’s title and distinguish your entry.
    •       Look at the other images and give your comments on at least one of those.
    •       For comments, try to go beyond a simple pat on the back or a short dismissal.
    •       Do you like an image (or essay) ? Try to explain WHY it appeals to you.
    •       Negative feedback is OK (we all want to learn), but be polite and constructive.  Try to explain why the image (or essay) does not appeal to you and how it might be improved.

    We will start with single images.  Re-establishing our C&C for essays will be a next step.

    Please limit any individual contribution to a single image.  This avoids confusion.
    The critique you give is vital. What was your first impression? What catches your eye about an image? Why? What do you like, and what distracts you? What would you change?
    Fiddle with the image in your head - composition, perspective, color balance, exposure.

    It is understood that unless the original poster specifically states that they do not want an altered image posted that you are free to alter the posted image and repost it in a reply for C&C purposes (no use for other purposes!). That reposted image may remain permanently or you may remove it after a short period of time if you prefer. No copyright disputes here!
    More general feedback is also welcome. Do you know something about taking the same sort of image that would make matters easier - share your own as an example in your reply. Encourage - it is a scary business putting your work up for other people to judge!

    And finally, here are some useful hints for navigating and familiarizing yourself with the forum mechanics of DPRevived:
    •       Unfortunately, there is no threaded view (yet).  We can’t simply keep images and their related comments together like we used to.  So please make clear about which image you are commenting.
    •       To do that, you may make good use of the “quote” feature.  This allows you to keep the image in your reply.  Excess content can be deleted.  The “preview” button allows you to look at what you are going to post.
    •       There is a difference between the “reply” button that sits at the top of the forum, and the reply buttons under every post.
    •       A few threads in this new forum with useful navigation information:
    dprevived.com/t/how-to-use-this-site/387/ 
    and
    dprevived.com/t/how-to-embed-photos-into-your-post-directly-from-flickr/456/
    (this applies also, with modifications, to other photo hosting websites)
    and
dprevived.com/t/how-to-quote/1014/

    Have fun and let’s stick together!

  • Members 1416 posts
    Oct. 4, 2023, 5:13 a.m.

    Gentrification. Taranto. Itay
    Taranto. Gentrification.jpg

    Taranto. Gentrification.jpg

    JPG, 1.4 MB, uploaded by MikeFewster on Oct. 4, 2023.

  • Members 1662 posts
    Oct. 4, 2023, 7:05 a.m.

    I love the shot - it's very effective at what it portrays. I also like the tones a lot. I thought about two things: Cropping it slightly differently and increasing the difference between the two buildings. I've tried it and came to the conclusion that neither is really necessary or clearly beneficial, so I think I'd just leave it as it is. It's an interesting shot and works really well!

  • Members 789 posts
    Oct. 4, 2023, 7:57 a.m.

    OSTRA - (“No Gentrification”)

    Thanks, Mike, for starting the thread in my absence.

    As a juxtaposition to your image, here is another from Italy, from yesterday morning, on the main square of Ostra in Le Marche:

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    IMG_7176.jpeg

    JPG, 367.7 KB, uploaded by RoelHendrickx on Oct. 4, 2023.

  • Members 1266 posts
    Oct. 4, 2023, 10:22 a.m.

    Whitney Block.
    1928 Art Deco government building, still standing.

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    RA020025x.jpg

    JPG, 3.5 MB, uploaded by ChrisOly on Oct. 4, 2023.

  • Members 1662 posts
    Oct. 4, 2023, 10:30 a.m.

    It looks like I completely missed that this weeks theme was "buildings from a low point of view"! 😂 I‘m clearly off with my contribution in that case…

  • Members 882 posts
    Oct. 4, 2023, 10:52 a.m.

    Cobwebs on my statue.
    On the long journey to Poland, we made an overnight stop in the city of Görlitz, in germany right on the border to Poland
    Here’s just one shot from the town square with the lens stopped right down to make some sun stars.

    DSC_9816 smaller.JPG

    Just before our holiday to Poland I treated myself to this new lens.
    The Z 24-120 F4 definitely lives up to its “S” class badge.
    It has practically the same quality as my very good compact Z 24-70 F4 in the equivalent range and continues on with that similar quality out to 120mm. The image quality is definitely better than my Z 24-200. Although I do lose some range, I don’t lose quite as much as when I only used the Z 24-70 and also gain some IQ with a brighter lens, and it is still relatively compact.
    Going forward it will be my go to walkaround lens 😊

    DSC_9816 smaller.JPG

    JPG, 3.3 MB, uploaded by Fireplace33 on Oct. 4, 2023.

  • Members 1266 posts
    Oct. 4, 2023, 10:57 a.m.

    Great contrast in both facades. I wonder why someone elected to do so, but that is probably what architecture is all about - different take on common design of a building.

  • Members 882 posts
    Oct. 4, 2023, 10:57 a.m.

    Placing the jagged shape, made by looking up at the lamp, in that jagged space left by the buildings, creates a great composition.
    Nice colours too.

  • Members 1266 posts
    Oct. 4, 2023, 11 a.m.

    Good angle and ideal catch of the sun. Congrats on a new lens. It serves you well.

  • Members 1266 posts
    Oct. 4, 2023, 11:03 a.m.

    Yes, position of the lamppost is absolutely ideal and it forces the viewer to look up and see great architectural details of the surrounding buildings.

  • Members 1266 posts
    Oct. 4, 2023, 11:06 a.m.
  • Members 1266 posts
    Oct. 4, 2023, 11:08 a.m.

    Pure accident...

  • Members 1589 posts
    Oct. 4, 2023, 11:22 a.m.

    It has always been interesting how some themes develop within the group without any planning. Like you, I'm short of old/tall buildings this week (and every week) but I am revisiting a theme Lou started last week, of what folks leave on docks.

  • Members 1589 posts
    Oct. 4, 2023, 11:27 a.m.

    Left on the dock - Pass Christian harbor, MS. (I was gonna post this last week but Lou got to the dock first. Photographing dock debris is something I do too, it's like a record of the folks who've been there.)

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    P9100245-Edit.jpg

    JPG, 2.4 MB, uploaded by minniev on Oct. 4, 2023.

  • Members 1266 posts
    Oct. 4, 2023, 11:55 a.m.

    Like your framing with yellow. Splash of red and blue and white definitely adds to the overall interest in this image.Excellent.

  • Members 689 posts
    Oct. 4, 2023, 12:18 p.m.

    Just to bring something different to the table

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    Stingray.jpg

    JPG, 522.0 KB, uploaded by Sagittarius on Oct. 4, 2023.