• Members 782 posts
    Nov. 13, 2024, 7:47 a.m.

    Welcome to the Wednesday Comments and Critique (No Theme & No Brand) thread!

    We are dedicated to continuing the great tradition of this C&C thread because we are convinced that looking at, and talking about images is vital for better photography.

    Our tried and tested concept (15 years and running!) is a weekly "peer-to-peer" photo comments & critique encounter, in which you GIVE and RECEIVE.

    The idea is simple: you post a photo or photo-based image that you have made and get critique on it. And in return you give other people your honest but constructive opinion of their images.

    Any Theme, Any Camera, Any Style, Any Subject.

    We are still figuring out how to create the convenience of threaded view on this new forum.
    For now, let us agree that you post an image or essay with a title and short explanation, and that all comments include the image as a quote.
    Replies to comments may or may not include quotes.

    THREAD GUIDELINES – THE SHORT & SWEET VERSION
    • This thread does not care about brands. It’s not about the tool, but the image.
    • Post one image or essay that you have made and would like to get comments on.
    An entry can either be a single image or a short essay. With an essay we mean not a collection of random images without any connection, seeking C&C on more than one of them. We mean instead a limited number (3 to 10) of connected images that together try to tell a story, create a fuller picture of a situation, event or location, etc.
    • Add a clear title to your post to distinguish your entry.
    • Look at the other images/essays and give your comments on at least one of those.
    • For comments, try to go beyond a simple pat on the back or a short dismissal.
    • Do you like an image (or essay) ? Try to explain WHY it appeals to you.
    • Negative feedback is OK (we all want to learn), but be polite and constructive. Try to explain why the image (or essay) does not appeal to you and how it might be improved.
    • Please stay on topic, i.e. concentrate on the image and the photographic comments, without getting into politics or other distractions. No non-photographic arguments.

    The critique you give is vital.
    What was your first impression? What catches your eye about an image? Why?
    What do you like, and what distracts you? What would you change?

    Fiddle with the image in your head - composition, perspective, color balance, exposure.

    PLEASE NOTE CLEARLY:
    Unless the original poster specifically states (for every individual posting offered for C&C) that they do not want their image(s) to be downloaded, altered or reposted, it is understood that within the context of this thread, other participants are free to download and alter the posted image and repost it in a reply for C&C purposes. That reposted image may remain permanently within the week's thread, or you may remove it after a short period of time if you prefer. The downloaded and altered images are not to be used for any other purposes nor uploaded anywhere else than within the context of the C&C in this thread. No copyright disputes here!

    Encourage - it is a scary business putting your work up for other people to judge!

    More general feedback is also welcome.
    Do you know something about taking the same sort of image that would make matters easier - share your own as an example in your reply.

    Have fun, be respectful and let’s stick together!

  • Members 782 posts
    Nov. 13, 2024, 7:49 a.m.

    ALBANIA in LAYERS

    Back to Albania. Back to an Iphone image.
    One from a pretty strenuous hike through the hills just north of Përmet.

    roelh.zenfolio.com/img/s/v-10/p526303210-6.jpg

  • Members 1369 posts
    Nov. 13, 2024, 8:15 a.m.

    Lisbon.
    Please do not download or edit this image without permission.

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    Lisbon. Street.jpg

    JPG, 1.0 MB, uploaded by MikeFewster on Nov. 13, 2024.

  • Members 148 posts
    Nov. 13, 2024, 8:21 a.m.

    I really like how cleanly you can see the different layers.

  • Members 148 posts
    Nov. 13, 2024, 8:21 a.m.

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    GoPro 7
    Internal HDR

    Correction: Not GoPro, Samsung S8 Phone

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    JPG, 888.7 KB, uploaded by JSPhotoHobby on Nov. 13, 2024.

  • Members 3952 posts
    Nov. 13, 2024, 8:27 a.m.

    This is the entrance from Bass Strait into the Gippsland Lakes, Victoria, Australia. (stitched panorama)

    It is a treacherous narrow opening for water craft with the ocean tide pouring through the gap.


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    lakesEntrance.jpg

    JPG, 9.0 MB, uploaded by DanHasLeftForum on Nov. 13, 2024.

  • Members 148 posts
    Nov. 13, 2024, 8:31 a.m.

    I like the shapes. The windows are a bit distracting, I think I would like them better if they were in a deep shadow to make them more blue to contrast the peach, and the road portion a near black. It would carry through the shapes and color of the wall and sign.

  • Members 1369 posts
    Nov. 13, 2024, 9:36 a.m.

    JSPhoto and Dan,
    I agree with you. If you check my OP you will note that it was edited. The editing was the removal of the original image. It looked a little too dark when I saw it on screen. I quickly replacing it with a brightened version and didn't look too closely. Mistake. I'll post the earlier version later.

  • Members 1548 posts
    Nov. 13, 2024, 12:11 p.m.

    Ladies on the march (prairie wildlife sanctuary run by national park service, Golden Pond, KY).

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    JPG, 6.3 MB, uploaded by minniev on Nov. 13, 2024.

  • Members 1245 posts
    Nov. 13, 2024, 12:37 p.m.

    Two worlds

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    R1010017x_remastered.jpg

    JPG, 3.0 MB, uploaded by ChrisOly on Nov. 13, 2024.

  • Members 782 posts
    Nov. 13, 2024, 1:17 p.m.

    The last remains of morning fog and then some backlighting. That's all it takes.
    I also made quite a few telephoto images here, compressing the layers even more, sometimes in a vertical frame.
    Still gotta see how these turned out.

  • Nov. 13, 2024, 1:29 p.m.

    That is really good - and a very unusual twist to leading lines.

    Alan

  • Members 1245 posts
    Nov. 13, 2024, 1:30 p.m.

    Like that dreamy shot with layered peaks in the distance. .
    Would lop off 20% from the bottom though(imho). A candidate for print and hang.

  • Members 1245 posts
    Nov. 13, 2024, 1:31 p.m.

    That fauna shot in a very natural environment is very pleasing. Good light you had there.

  • Members 1245 posts
    Nov. 13, 2024, 1:33 p.m.

    Like the framing and wrong way sign. The colours are the main theme here for me.

  • Members 1245 posts
    Nov. 13, 2024, 1:35 p.m.

    There is a lot happening here. The blooming trees are the main event , I reckon.

  • Members 1245 posts
    Nov. 13, 2024, 1:36 p.m.

    Very calm and peaceful shot. Like that panorama shot.

  • Members 701 posts
    Nov. 13, 2024, 4:24 p.m.

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    Furled Umbrella, Oceanside, CA

    Umbrella.jpg

    JPG, 3.7 MB, uploaded by Rich42 on Nov. 13, 2024.